托福作文范文（二）
下面给出按各评分标准的范文，仅供参考。
范文三（4分）
After a foreign student has decided to come to
the United States to study English, he must think
about where (where he) is going to live and with
whom. I believe that he should live with (an)
American family if he can becuase (because) they
can give him the support (that) he needs. They
can help him improve his English, too.
To begin with, the foreigner who inhabits (lives)
with an American family can rely on them for suprot
(support) as he adjusts to a complete (completely)
new way of life. Suppose that (This is especially
helpful if) he becomes homesick.
Another advantage to living with an American family
is (that) the student can improve his English
quick (quickly). He will met (meet) friends who
came (come) to visit. he (He ) will force (be
forced) to use English whether he wants to or
not.
As far as disadvantages are concerned, I see only
one (one:) he may be treated like a baby. The
family (family will) want to protect him from
danger (dangerous) situations.
I will conclude by saying that even is the student
has to put up (with) being treated like a child
sometimes, he is better off the live (living)
with an American family which they (who) can help
home. He will find kindness and support when he
is new in the country. Also, he will speak English
most of the time.
范文四（3分）
A foreing (foreign) student studying in America
is wise to live with an American family because
when a foreing (foreign) student came (comes)
to the United States he must make many important
adjustment (adjustments). A foreing (foreign)
student must change to survive in his new imvironment
(environment). A foreing (foreign) student also
learns how to take on responsibilities concerning
his new family, he (; he) adopts (adapts) to their
American life style (lifestyle) as they adopt
(adapt) to his. It is a learning experience on
both parts.
You have a (A student has an) advantage when living
(he lives) with an American family. Because (because)
they would (he will) learn the american (American)
ways and customs better with an american (American)
family than if they would live (he lived) with
there (his) own homeboys (countrymen).
The american (American) family becomes a second
family to the foreing (foreign) student. At times
a foreing (foreign) student may get homesick;
but having (having) a trustworthy second family
can give him the security and acceptance he (that
he) needs. He is probably use (used) to having
a family around him, so he will feel safe if he
lives with an American family. Then he must consider
that he will be in a strange place. Everything
will be new to you (him).
His American family can help him learn his way
around. So (Therefore) foreing (a foreign student)
is smart to live with an American family.
范文五（2分）
My opinion about this subject is that it depends
in (on) your level of comprehension regard (regarding)
conversational english (English). In other words;
(words,) if you understand a considerable amount
of english (English) language, your best bet would
be to chose (choose) living with an American family.
But, if your comprehension level is so low, in
which (that) a basic communication is not possible,
then (it) would be wise to (for) you to choose
living with people of your same country and (or)
language.
