托福写作专攻：4分作文样例
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Topic: some intensive English Programs
in the United States offer a foreign Student the
option of living with an American family while
he or she is studying abroad. Many students feel
that such a home-stay program is a valuable part
of their totle learning experience. however, others
may feel that such a plan offers little value.
in a short essay, discuss one or two advantages
of living with an American family and then state
one or two diadvantages. Tell whether youare in
favor of or opposed to the idea of home-stay.
give examples to support your opinion.
After a foreign student has decided
to come to the United States to study English,
he must think about where(where he) is going to
live and with whom. I believe that he should live
with (with an) American family if he can because
they can give him the support(support that) he
needs. they can help him improve his English,
too.
To begin with, the Foreigner who
inhabits(lives) with an American family can rely
on them for support as he adjusts to a complete(completely)
new way of life. Suppose that(This is especially
helpful if) he becomes homesick.
Another advantage to live with an
American family is (is that) the student can improve
his English quick(quickly). He will met(meet)
friends who came(come) to visit. He will force(be
forced) to use English whether he wants or not.
As far as disadvantages are concerned,
I see only one: he may be treated like a baby.
The family(family will)want to protect him from
danger(dangerous)situation.
I will concluded by saying that
even if the student has to put up(up with) being
treated like a child sometimes, he is better off
the live(living) with an American family which
they (who)can help him. He will find kindness
and support when he is new in the country. Also,
he will speak English most of the time.
